I have been practising using words that give readers pictures in their minds.
Last week, my whole school did Athletics Day.
The 9 year old boys and girls rushed excitedly from Vortex to High Jump. The girls walked over to their blue, soft, plastic, ripped high jump mat. The bar was black and white. The girls’ supervisor was Carla.
The 9 year old boys and girls rushed excitedly from Vortex to High Jump. The girls walked over to their blue, soft, plastic, ripped high jump mat. The bar was black and white. The girls’ supervisor was Carla.
I was so nervous. I felt like I was a bug in a giant spider’s web but I had a good feeling that I would do well. The boys’ mat was the size of a hippo and it was green and white and had stitching marks on it. The bar was orange and white.
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