Once upon a time, there were two boys. One was named Josh and one was named Nat. One morning, they decided to go for a fish so they hopped into their dingy and paddled out. It was still dark and cold.
When they got out deeper, they put down their lines. Suddenly, they both got a bite then Josh got a bigger bite.
The next moment, a big school of tuna was under the boat then, in the corrner of Josh's eye, he saw two Mako sharks, circling around the little boat.Just then, a bigger Mako shark hit the boat. The boys fell out of the boat. The water was as cold as ice, then they saw a little island. They swam as fast as they could. Josh's heart was pumping like loud music.
They got to the island. Josh was about to have a heart attack.
Wow Josh, what a cool story. Yes I would be having a heart attack too, if I was in icy cold water with a Mako shark. I look forward to hearing what happens to you on the island......
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My heart was pumping like loud music - a great simile, Josh. It must have been scary, but, because you had all those swimming lessons at the beginning of the year, you were able to out-swim the sharks! You have drawn a fantastic picture, using Paint. Well done.
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