Once there was a girl called Sarah. She lived on a beach front. Sarah was 10 years old. After school, she would always go to her favourite island with a palm tree on it.One Saturday morning, Sarah woke up early. She got her brown, wooden dinghy and her story writing book, then she dragged her dinghy into the water and paddled to her island
After a while, she was close to her island. She hopped out and pulled the dinghy up onto the sand. She climbed up to her wooden seat. She opened her book and started to write.
After a while, it was getting dark. She started to pack up her book but then she caught sight of sharks surrounding the island.
She was so scared she screamed. It was so loud the sharks got scared off and swam away to chase fish. Sarah jumped out of the tree and ran to her dinghy and paddled home.
Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your piece of writing that will go with this picture. When I look at this picture I can think of many things. Being stranded on a deserted island, being on a luxury holiday over looking the sea or being in the desert.
Mrs Atkins
Hi Josh, I hope you are enjoying the school production. Today is the first live show, all the best!!
ReplyDeleteThat messeage was from you mum!
DeleteThank you for Replying to me mum.
DeleteI love your story Joshua, It's so lucky that the girl screamed so she get safely.
ReplyDeleteMrs S